It was a rough day in fruit forest rather hot but still windy. Mean while during the storm, there were two spoonbills fishing. "It's a perfect day for fishing!" one of the spoon bills shouted over the wind. Suddenly they found a School of fish swimming towards them. They tried to catch the small slimy fish but the furious wind caught one of the birds wings and instead of catching the silver fast fish he ended up splat, face first into the cold crystal clear water. The other spoon bill laughed his feathers off but then ended up in the water too.
By Alyssa C
You have very descriptive Language in you'r story and well done
ReplyDeleteBy Adam
Great story Alyssa i loved the way you made your story how having the wind was good instead of bad. Great descriptive words such as cold crystal clear water and small slimy fish.
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