Monday, May 18, 2015

Anna - The Moon

Sophia was walking down the street to get books on the moon so she could learn about it for her project. But the ferocious wind stopped her. Sophia was blown to the right then to the left when suddenly she felt her feet leave the ground! She was flying head first to the moon! She walked around the moon and learnt all about it. Suddenly she remembered her project! That was the moment when Sophia felt a cold fluid being poured over her and someone shouting in her ear saying “Sophia time to get up for school. Remember you have your project today” That was when she woke up.


By Anna
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 19, 2015 at 4:22 PM

    i like it because she has interesting words, next time add more description.


    From Dom

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  2. AnonymousMay 19, 2015 at 4:26 PM

    I LIKE UR USE OF WORDS NEXT TIME TRY AND CHEECK OVER YOUR WORK

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  3. AnonymousMay 21, 2015 at 11:44 AM

    I like the way you used imagery in your 100WC this week, Anna. What a neat way to learn about the moon... to actually go there! I think it would be pretty exciting to visit the moon!
    Keep up the great writing.

    Ms. Kuzik, Team 100WC
    Vancouver, BC, Canada

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