Tuesday, May 26, 2015

Caitlyn - Overjoyed

Large birch trees cast dim shadows over Olivia as she travelled up the cobblestone path to her house.
The magnificent sun just set behind the mountains.
Olivia stepped inside and sat down at the ancient oak desk in-front of her.
She stopped and was interrupted by a appetizing scent.
A large red velvet cake was placed down carefully by her mac-book pro.
Study papers were scattered over a neatly decorated present which reminded her of newly decorated Christmas trees.
Olivia rose with both of her bare hands spread around the present.
But as she lifted the lid, she was overjoyed.

By Caitlyn

1 comment:

  1. I like how you used,"but as she lifted the lid", at the end of your story.

    Marika (Valley School)

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