One day i was running along the side of the road and then a rock hit me.I was knock out.But when I woke up I saw a big sparkling golden jar.I sprinted to it and it started to rain.Then I pick it up and ran to my house.When I got inside I was completely trench.As she lifted the lid she smelt chocolate,heard the of delious lolly-pop and then felt a ruff coke lolly.My first instint was to eat it so I did. It was so yummy and nice.Then i started to hypo and I smash all the vases.Oh no
By Jet-Li
I like how u said you got knock out. I like describe the lolly's. You need to read it to your self. By Alex ( valley school )
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