100 years ago in Hayling Island a little girl set out to practise her
Archery. The weather was horrendous but the little girl was determined.
She snuck out her window and ran to the paddock. She took big slow steps
as big gusts of wind hit her.
The wind was bashing her about yet she kept going. The tall, thick oak
trees crashed above as the little girl ran for her life.
When she got there, she pulled out her favourite arrow, strung it to her
bow and was getting ready to pull it back but the ferocious wind blew it
away. The girl searched for it every day since, and to this day some say
they still see the ghost of the little girl searching for her lost arrow.
By Ruby
This is an AMAZING story!! It is so discriptive and I love how the girl is so determined. My only question is: Where did the little girl run for her life to?
ReplyDelete-Kaitlyn
WOW ruby you just gave me goose bumps i love the language you used, and how the little girl reminds me a lot about you thank you
ReplyDeletemaddison
Good job. I really liked the ending.
ReplyDeleteRiley
I loved your story next time add a dun dun dun at the end to make it more scary
ReplyDeleteby Brooklynn
Wow that's a really good story you used some great describing words and there where really good sentences
ReplyDeleteRuby ( valley school )
:)