As the dew shined off the grass and trees, the path was surrounded by trees and bush. You could see all the way to the end befor it went of to the left. leafs flew to the ground then spinned and twirled in the wind. then it all went still… Suddenly a UFO came over head it crashed just a few meters ahead of me. The spacecraft burst into flames burning all of the trees around it. Something came out of the rekedge I started to run in the other direction I ran and ran then all at once...
check your spelling and caps on when you start a new sentence.
ReplyDeleteI like you story when it has a cliff hanger.
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good grammar,but more despritive writing
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