Wednesday, August 24, 2016

Week 5 - The eel by Michaela


A black flamingo sat in the calm pond waiting for food. The flamingo  waited patiently for  while and every now and then poked her head into the water to see if there was anything worth while. She waited and waited for food but an eel popped out from underneath and took the food just as the flamingo was about to get it, the flamingo was sad and the eel swam away laughing then the flamingo and eel were eaten by a mythical creature that emerged out of the water then proceed to destroy each and every thing that got in its way.

1 comment:

  1. Good story but next time put some commas, and some extra words
    and you forgot to put that other word in there
    Sam Carter

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