Wednesday, August 24, 2016

Week 5 - THE LONEY BLACK FLAMINGO by Tamara

                                                                                                             
Once upon a time there lived a black flamingo. One day he felt loney. So he decided to go for a daily walk in the forest. All of a sudden he felt a poke somethink poked him on the tail. Ouch he yelled he turned all of a sudden a lion was behind him roar. “please dont eat me” he cryed “all I want to say is. Then the flamingo just ran away. GET HIM the lion yelled his team mates raced after the flamingo the they bringed him back still alive. Then they grabbed the poor flamingo by the neak then the lion siad it to his face I wanted to say was you look scrumptious to eat the flamingo pled to the lion “NO NO NO”yes. Wait who siad that me im another girl flamingo 

By Tamara

1 comment:

  1. I really enjoyed your story because you replaced a boring word and that word was scrumptius and added a few vivid verbs.

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